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Stop Watch
Contributed by
JPMcMillan
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:45:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Stop Watch
Twist of fate, the mornings come,
Golden days, prominent and young.
The leaf that falls, will set and rot,
Twas a time I knew, a dream I shot.
My greener days, come stronge and clear,
Now for me, only memory to fear.
Play and stray, as a young boy should,
Who could have known, that this was good.
Copyright ©
JPMcMillan
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2003-11-15 00:45:25]
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Re: Stop Watch
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:14:53 AM AEST
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Very good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Stop Watch
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by ammalu on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:36:44 AM AEST
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| good theme though narration is very brief - good attempt - keep writing. |
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