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Take Notice
Contributed by
Rachel
on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 10:56:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Have you ever noticed
When we touch the world stops?
Or the way, when you look at me,
Everything starts spinning?
Have you ever wondered why
When you hold me angels sing?
Do you realize I love you,
Or that we could have something great?
How perfect we would be together
If you would allow it to be fate?
Have you ever noticed
When you touch me I flinch?
Or the way, when you look at me,
I close my eyes and turn away?
Have you ever wondered why
When you talk I have nothing to say?
Will you ever realize
It hurts me to be near you?
Everyday I wonder why
I want you but I can't have you.
Copyright ©
Rachel
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2003-11-14 22:56:40]
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Re: Take Notice
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:43:26 AM AEST
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Re: Take Notice
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by ToriVeigh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 12:53:21 AM AEST
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| I like it and it strikes a familiar cord. |
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