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famous lover
Contributed by
princesspurty
on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 11:35:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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fill the tub with warm water and lay rose petals about the floor
caress my skin with love as you shut the door
fill the air with a romantic beat
turn down the lights as the air will heat
shower me with more than what water has to offer me tonight
towel me off and guide me to your light
hold me close as you teach me new things i need to know
show me how much love can really grow
and when morning finds us close to one another
thank you for being my famous lover
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2002-08-24 11:35:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: famous lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilman on
Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 10:27:26 AM AEST (User
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Dirty! but I like it. one thing though...the last line is a little cliche, but, thats the only thing I would change |
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