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Together as One
Contributed by
Ivy
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Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 01:17:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AnniversaryPoems
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Years have passed that you have come in this world,
Together you have spent years like a bangle of pearl.
It's been long, but a lovely journey,
You have had various experiences,
Some were hard and some very pleasurable.
Today is a best day for me to confess,
That I am thankful to GOD for giving me the best.
So caring, understanding and loving you are,
You make my saddest moments disappear.
My love for you cannot be expressed in words,
I just know that you both are the best in this world
Copyright ©
Ivy
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2003-11-14 13:17:34]
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Re: Together as One
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 01:57:18 PM AEST
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| THIS IS WONDERFUL that you feel so loving towards your parents. and so great that they have been together for years, yes lifes trails bring you closer if you have someone who really loves you god bless you and your parents for having such a lovely child |
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Re: Together as One
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 04:14:17 PM AEST
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Lovely dedication to your parents..they must be so proud of you..
Jenni |
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Re: Together as One
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by Damien on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 04:07:52 AM AEST
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This by far one of your best poems, well done....
Danny. |
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Re: Together as One
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by The_Poet on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 02:03:51 PM AEST
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| Nice Write. Compliments well with their anniversary. They are Blessed to have you.. Great write.. ;) Keep em coming |
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