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silly girl
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 06:10:30 AM in AEST
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i look at your glum face pointing towards the ground
you silly girl
cant you see how beutifull you are?
you can do anything
you have the intelligence
to rule the world
you can do anything you silly girl
people to you are devoted
you pay them back with a frown
cant you see how lucky you are to keep these people around?
you say you feel no love
you silly girl
is the love from a full family not enought
so silly girl open yours eyes
count your self lucky
stop telling these lies
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loopylou
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2003-11-14 06:10:30]
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Re: silly girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 06:17:33 AM AEST
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hi loopyloo guess I'll b loopy li
Great writng!
I luv every word in this write.
It really puts a smile in a silly girls heart.
Bless u 4 the heart smile!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: silly girl
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by ToriVeigh on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 01:10:58 AM AEST
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| With a friend as encouraging as you seem to be, she should feel better about herself soon. I thought it was great. |
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Re: silly girl
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 11:24:01 AM AEST
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I gave you a five
Its good to be alive
To have a friend as you
To talk and take away the
blues
I like your poem
For many girls this the
norm
They need friends such as
you
Someone to speak what is
true
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