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Together At Last
Contributed by
Sugarbird
on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 04:48:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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One day we'll be
together at last,
We'll see the sunset
and dawn together,
At last;
One day,you'll see
my eyes looking into yours,
While making love,
Or chatting over a cup of tea...
-One day soon-
Our story's just begun;
The middle's creamy,
And the end's a long way down the line-
After all the trials,
The lonely and cold nights;
Disappointments and hurt
will evaporate under the heat,
Of our love!
Copyright ©
Sugarbird
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2003-11-14 04:48:44]
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Re: Together At Last
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 04:51:39 AM AEST
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very good desription
i must say...
quite emotional too...
i neva bother 2 look 2 da future...
it alwayz comes soon enough...
Kaitlyn{Kat} |
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Re: Together At Last
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 09:00:23 PM AEST
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Very good! Deep poem I enjoyed how desriptive your poem was. Good title to I often have a hard time titling my pieces.
~ B.B. Princess |
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Re: Together At Last
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by Trisha on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 11:57:01 PM AEST
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| this is good i like it |
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