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Broken
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 12:42:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So fragile
breaking like a staw
ripped in half
So sensitive
shattering like glass
So gullable
believing everything
that's ever been said to you
so broken you
can't be fixed
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-11-14 00:42:23]
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Re: Broken
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 12:53:27 AM AEST
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Very good description.
I certainly hope u feel better now.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 04:49:26 AM AEST
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Pleasantly explicit..
i really do hope ure feelin beta,
if not, i just wanna let u noe
that i'll alwayz be there 4 u,
just contact me any time...
even if i am ONLY seven years old!
i neva botha 2 look 2 da future...
it alwayz comes soon enough...
Kaitlyn{Kat} |
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Re: Broken
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 02:49:45 AM AEST
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| great poem. always remember anythings possible |
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