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When he smiles
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
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Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 10:33:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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All my reservations flee
I glow, I fly and I yearn
Swiftly, my heartbeats speed
And I smile back in return
When he heads out
My heartbeat slows
Long nights of doubt
My worry grows
I wonder, does he know?
Oh, how I hope he’ll come!
Anticipation, does it show?
Will the waiting ever be done?
All I need to believe
All I need to know
Soon, here he will be
And his smile will he show
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ToriVeigh
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2003-11-13 22:33:50]
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Re: When he smiles
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by doug on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 10:52:04 PM AEST
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| i hope he comes home and never leaves so you will always be happy nice poem |
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Re: When he smiles
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:56:15 PM AEST
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ToriVeigh,
So you suffer the same? Secret love.... so very frustrating.... I think you captured the feeling of it well--- all thoughs and feeling hanging on a single smile or hello.... Then you spend the next day or so replaying that scene over and over in your head.....
Great poem... yeah, it's short and to the point as you say =)
I hope all goes well with your special someone ; )
God bless,
Jellybellyprincess |
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