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In My Grave
Contributed by
doug
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Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 09:51:29 PM in AEST
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in my grave I wait... for eternity to come
in my grave I wait... so damn young...
so damn young
in my grave I see you ... looking down on me
lord release me... from the things I see...
the things I see
I hear the worms... eating at my coffin
voices from beyond...I hear them often...
I hear them often
my bodys frozen... my eyes are black
you stare down at me... and I stare back
I stare back
inside I'm screaming...for you to take me
the voices twist me... the voices break me
the voices break me
they tell me to come...and I'm enthralled
they pull me down... I go along
and now I'm gone
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-13 21:51:29]
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Re: In My Grave
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 11:45:01 PM AEST
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Neat write!! I really liked the repetitive lines
Look forward to more
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Re: In My Grave
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 05:45:47 AM AEST
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ooh, i like this..
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Re: In My Grave
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 05:25:01 AM AEST
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| chilling..venkat |
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Re: In My Grave
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:49:45 PM AEST
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doug this is brilliant, i just love your poetry, i cant wait for the next poem! hugs n' love nessa
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