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Untold Thoughts
Contributed by
Puffer
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Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 01:30:03 PM in AEST
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Wanting to tell you everything I hide,
Afraid to let you see what's really inside.
All these emotions bottled away,
Inside I'm afraid they will forever stay.
You say tell me, I'm here to help,
But you're the reason these feelings are felt.
So how can I say what's really in my heart,
When I know in the end, it will tear you apart.
Copyright ©
Puffer
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2003-11-13 13:30:03]
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Re: Untold Thoughts
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 02:07:29 PM AEST
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great write for a short one
I enjoyed reading this
peace
JENNA |
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Re: Untold Thoughts
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:22:43 PM AEST
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A fine write
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Re: Untold Thoughts
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 07:05:43 AM AEST
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Dear Puffer my dear,
Your parents, are tough, have no fear.
What you say to them, may hurt, but it hurts you more to keep it inside and let it tear,
the relationship you should have with your
Mom and Dad.
Your poem is so heartwrenching, and filled with fear....I can remember when I was scared too...but you're going to be surprized if you do.....tell them a thing or two..It is going to make you feel the fool, I'll bet. They are parents.....and they will forgive and forget!
lovingcritters
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Re: Untold Thoughts
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by Trisha on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 10:31:32 PM AEST
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| Damn This is really good |
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Re: Untold Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:46:03 PM AEST
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Your poems get better each time! I can totally relate!! Good going.
-Esther |
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