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Secret
Contributed by
BlueStar
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Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 12:11:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You see the cuts and turn your head
Then you ask the question I always dread
I know that you won’t understand so I try and lie
But I waited too long to answer I can see it in your eyes
When you start to cry I try and act surprised
I try to ask what’s the matter
But I’ll that will come out is a stutter
Before I know it my eyes are filled with tears
I can’t take it anymore so I let my secret fill your ears
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BlueStar
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2003-11-13 12:11:34]
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Re: Secret
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 01:17:45 PM AEST
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Sometimes we prefer the lies, but the truth is always whats best. A very emotional write.
Well done..Larry |
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Re: Secret
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 04:18:37 PM AEST
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| A good write, I can feel your pain. |
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Re: Secret
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:29:09 AM AEST
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Vivid. You portray the emotion very movingly.
Beautiful.
Andrew |
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