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End This

Contributed by sweet-poison on Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 07:06:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

This feeling in the pit of my stomach,
This burning,
Sickening hurt,
I cannot eat,
I cannot breathe,
My tears burn,
Boiled by this eternal flame.

Take my hand,
Place it on your heart,
Do you feel this?
Does it hurt?
This is my hurt,
This is the hurt,
That you inflict on me.

You deserve this too,
You should cry,
Half of these tears,
Take this hurt,
Please,
Let us share,
This heartbreak serves two.

I'd sooner die,
Than live with this pain,
Please take me,
Take me away,
Subtract my person,
From this earths population,
Please.

Pour a water over this flame,
Please,
Stop my heart from aching,
End this with your loyalty,
Please!
Why do you hesitate?
Please.

Wont you end my hurt?
End it with your trust,
My numbers up.....

Copyright © sweet-poison ... [ 2003-11-13 07:06:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: End This (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 02:06:30 AM AEST
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another great write ... keep em coming

I enjoy all the poems i have read of yours

Peace

JENNA

Re: End This (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweet-Poison on Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 07:12:03 AM AEST
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aww thankeh =) glad you like

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