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I Love India but I don't want to be Eaten there
Contributed by
blain
on
Wednesday, 10th July 2002 @ 06:55:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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a rippling golden coat,
brushing through the undergrowth
or just the sun rays
splashing through the dancing ferns?
an enchanting amber snake,
entranced, swaying from side to side,
or the playful striped tail
of a ravenous feline?
two mysterious gems
glowing in the light
or the spying eyes
of a hungry predator?
four legs, clear now, disappearing
and reappearing through the bush
it could be anything...
deer, leopard...Tiger.
a deep, throaty growl
majestic, yet eerie
or is what I hear
distant thunder's cry?
I'm not staying to find out. good bye!!
Copyright ©
blain
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2002-07-10 18:55:54]
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Re: I Love India but I don't want to be Eaten there
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 11:35:40 PM AEST
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My first giggle of the day...very amusing blain :)
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Re: I Love India but I don't want to be Eaten there
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 10:01:08 AM AEST
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| Blain! your work exceeds others that I know off that have been rated higher than this one. It's not everyday that we see such unorthodox treatment of wild animals in verse! |
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Re: I Love India but I don't want to be Eaten there
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 01:03:16 AM AEST
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| wow, very interesting...the title a lone got my attention, great job blain...keep up the good work |
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