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thoughts that spill from my mind
Contributed by
rain
on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:43:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Death consumes me but i still breath
blood drips from scars unseen
demons haunt my dreams
sleep is my only enemy
i walk among the shadows
my only friend- the darkness
that consumes my world
i am haunted by memories
that caused blood to spill
tears refuse to fall
from shaded eyes
if you ever should wish to find me
i shall give you one clue
hunt among the shadows
if you dare to
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rain
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2003-11-12 23:43:05]
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Re: thoughts that spill from my mind
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 12:43:24 AM AEST
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Very sad but good work.
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: thoughts that spill from my mind
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 01:39:06 AM AEST
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wow very dark a very good write. Bravo!
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Re: thoughts that spill from my mind
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 05:46:38 AM AEST
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wow! This is such a good poem, i really love it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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