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tammie
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 05:32:47 PM in AEST
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Free
By Christina Arceri
She longed to be a bird and fly far far away
She felt bad for every blade of grass for planted they would stay
She longed to be free from what she felt were puppet strings
She was tired of everything being decided for her day after day
She longed to a mermaid and swim out to sea
She longed to be free from what she felt were puppetstrings
She longed to be a shooting star sailing through the sky
She longed to climb over the mountains and run far away
She pitied every flower put in a vase for there they would stay
She longed to be a cloud and float away
She longed to be the wind blowing through the trees
She longed to be free from what she felt were puppetstrings
She felt bad for every seashell washed upon the shore for on the shore they will stay
She longed to be an autumn leaf descending from the trees
She longed to be free from what she felt were puppetstings
She longed to be a flower blowing in the wind
She longed to be a butterfly soaring through the sky
She longed to be a snowflake falling from the heavens
People say she must have longed long enough
Because they woke one day and she was gone!
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2003-11-12 17:32:47]
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Re: Free
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:19:57 PM AEST
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Wow!! I loved this... Every line was beautiful, but I especially loved this one..
"She felt bad for every blade of grass for planted they would stay"
Jenni
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Re: Free
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 09:23:38 PM AEST
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| The beginning was great, but about midway through it began to feel forced. Your point came across loud and clear though. |
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