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Mako Ruin
Contributed by
cobalt
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 12:05:35 PM in AEST
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Got my back to the wall,
banging my head into the bricks.
Not a big deal,
I was just trying to knock it down.
Laughing at you as I bleed,
now didn't I tell you I can't die?
You shot me three times but
see me get right back up.
Mako Ruin is restored and
he follows the star in
the desert.
The book of the faulty phoenix.
Copyright ©
cobalt
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2003-11-12 12:05:35]
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Re: Mako Ruin
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:40:36 PM AEST
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this makes me think...
made me feel for you...take care sandy |
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Re: Mako Ruin
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:57:23 PM AEST
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needs a little work but you're headed in the right direction
thanks for sharing |
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