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circle of friends
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:43:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i am trapped in this circle of deseat and betrayle
one where you constantly watch your back
because you never know who's behind you ready with a knife
and if thiers a person in their with a gun
they are like a wild dog
they shoot anyone
so im always carfull not to get in the way of my "friends"
i have a secret that i cannot ever tell
though living with the guilt of its trully helll
but if i trust somone
when the circle turns the other way
my trust will be thrown away
and my stupidy used against me
so i shut my mouth
i wish i could sleep
i never dream
i always keep one i open
watching the eye thats watching me
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loopylou
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2003-11-12 04:43:25]
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Re: circle of friends
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 04:58:14 AM AEST
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| seen your two poems..there is some point in your writings..infact true friends who are very rare.But any way try to be positive since all are not bad. venkat |
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Re: circle of friends
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by 13Hopes on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:56:16 AM AEST
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A chilling reality written into this poem...
Good write....
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Re: circle of friends
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 05:27:52 PM AEST
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| Nice write BUT your poem could do with a spell check. |
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