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FIRST SOUND
Contributed by
justinblue
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Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 07:39:22 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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I'ts a hard thing to phathom how ones life, like a car can turn totally around
I'ts much like someone whose been deaf their whole life, and for the first time they hear sound
But it is possible for one to rocket themeself up out of the bottomless pit and reach higher ground
My tounge speaks the truth, fore I am an example of the miricale that can be done
An explosion of life like a shot fired from a gun
You ask how
Because we are all Gods daughters and sons
Copyright ©
justinblue
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2003-11-11 19:39:22]
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Re: FIRST SOUND
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by doug on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 08:33:48 PM AEST
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you are right, with God all things are possible
a good read |
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Re: FIRST SOUND
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:22:25 PM AEST
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A very good write, but it needs a spell check...
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Re: FIRST SOUND
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 07:40:16 PM AEST
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Really good write.
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