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The Dying Ember
Contributed by
doug
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 06:07:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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in the dying ember of life I sit
and like that embers light
floating away into the mist
of the endless starry night
oh sweet life why, why must
you fade away
matter not that I resist, still
you will decay
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-11 18:07:16]
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Re: The Dying Ember
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 08:19:46 PM AEST
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Excellent write..great analogy..
Jenni |
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Re: The Dying Ember
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 03:40:04 AM AEST
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| very nice poem |
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Re: The Dying Ember
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 12:26:21 PM AEST
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| excellent:) hugs n' love nessa |
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