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Prose for Mellissa
Contributed by
doug
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 05:58:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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the stars burn as soft
candles in the glowing night
illumination reflected in the
blue eyes of a child
the dim lights evade me as
an elusive dream
in the mind of a lover
restless and stiring
in this dream I see you
softly walking past me
in gown flowing gathering
the stars
and I whisper to you
softly into remorse
I am enamored of you as
a child, as a fool
I love you as I have never
loved before
then I feel your warm breath
gently against my neck
the words you say disturb me
as a child bitten
the dream is over you say,
open your eyes
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-11 17:58:58]
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Re: Prose for Mellissa
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:32:34 PM AEST
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Good imagery... I like this..
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Re: Prose for Mellissa
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 03:41:14 AM AEST
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| Oh, very very beautiful |
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Re: Prose for Mellissa
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 12:28:57 PM AEST
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| great style and enjoyably interesting all the way, keep 'em comin', hugs n' love nessa |
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