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Autumn Fire
Contributed by
doug
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 05:44:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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fall is the touch of a lover caressing
the face of beauty
and as that beauty, softly
it does flow
but that which is the sun is
bound to burn thy fingers
as her touch burns me
inside my soul
what love is this that I am
engulfed so completely
what autumn fire has been
loosed in my breast
woe to me that I should
live without her
for without her life would
be as death
so come my lover and sit
beside me
our kisses hidden, our
whispers too
submirsed in an ocean
of desire
as autumn fire, I burn
for you
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-11 17:44:32]
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:12:52 PM AEST
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Written with such passion... lovely poem..
Welcome to ypdc..Hope you like it here..and that you will post more poems soon.
Jenni |
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:39:32 PM AEST
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*sigh*..and *melts in chair* :)
This is goegeous..wow!!
Welcome welcome!!
Loving Whispers |
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 12:23:18 PM AEST
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| dearest doug, a poem among poems.... beautiful and captivating, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 05:50:31 AM AEST
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| Wow, such beautiful words ... just divine .... Jan |
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 17th November 2003 @ 06:02:11 AM AEST
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| Ah, sorry, forgot to sign in ... my comment above ... Jan |
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:07:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful write,keep writing,
PumpkinPie |
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Re: Autumn Fire
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by bluewolf on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:58:03 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem, keep writing |
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