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It kills me to watch
Contributed by
Serendippitty
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 02:44:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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It kills me inside to see him walking down the corridor
carrying her heavy stack of books,
She doesn't even notice his charm
or his striking good looks.
He bought her an expensive necklace
that she doesn't even wear
He treats her like a queen
and she doesn't even car.
It kills me how she's trying to change
the way he dresses and acts
Even worse it really kills me
when she kisses many other guys
behind his back.
I can kills me inside that I can't shout out
"Don't choose her choose me...
I treat you just right, make you happy
just you let us be!!"
Copyright ©
Serendippitty
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2003-11-11 14:44:36]
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Re: It kills me to watch
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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| Tought situation but you can change it if you try hard enought lou |
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Re: It kills me to watch
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by drunken_ghost on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 04:59:45 PM AEST
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| hell yeah... god i know that feeling damn good write. thankyou :-) |
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Re: It kills me to watch
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 11:17:57 PM AEST
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| Did it ever occur to you that maybe he likes being with a woman who treats him like crap? It doesn't make sense, but it does happen. Find someone who isn't such a loser. |
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