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Mother And Son
Contributed by
sbrandt
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 12:32:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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They venture forth together,
She leads with trembling hand.
Their future is uncertain,
No telling where they’ll land.
A rocky past behind them,
They search for safer shores.
The path they walk is narrow,
The rain upon them pours.
“Who will offer haven?”
She cries into the night.
The answer not forthcoming,
She vows to uphold the fight.
They cross the bridge determined,
Their journey nearly done.
The sacrifice well worth it,
For a mother and her son.
Copyright ©
sbrandt
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2003-11-11 12:32:57]
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Re: Mother And Son
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 01:51:33 PM AEST
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well written
peace
JENNA |
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Re: Mother And Son
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 02:19:36 PM AEST
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Great write
I could feel the emotion
loved it
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Re: Mother And Son
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 04:28:06 PM AEST
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I love it Well written
An excellent job. |
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Re: Mother And Son
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 08:11:10 PM AEST
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Wow! Wonderful poem about a mother and her son's journey,which is obviously alone together. Keep writing!!!! I look forward to more of your work! And by the way,WELCOME to the site!!! 0:-)
Angel always,godspeed my friend, joni |
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Re: Mother And Son
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM AEST
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| AAWW This was so wonderful,since I have two sons I will keep this handy! Christina |
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