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WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:22:10 AM in AEST
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(She) "Will you still love me,
when wrinkles frame my eyes?"
(He)"When I look at a beautiful picture
'Tis not the frame I see.
I see only the painting and
the Artist's creativity!"
(She)"And when my hair fades
with grey and then it's white?
In your eyes, will I still
be all right?"
(He)"When I'm embracing you
in my loving arms true,
I don't even notice the color,
Is it dark or light?"
(She)"My memory may fade,
I might "forget" as it becomes dim.
My waist won't be as thin.
Will you still request a "Love-in?"
(He)"Have you forgotten my dear,
my memory too, will disappear.
Your waist curvaceous thin?
I only see your heart, deep within!"
(She)"Will you still love me when I have
enlarged knuckles on my pretty hands &
my legs no longer heed commands?"
(He)"I'll never see the knuckles deformed,
Only the deeds those hands transformed,
and warmed!
When your legs give out on you,
Mine probably will too.
I'll buy a rocking chair built for two!
(She)"As I lose my teeth one at a time,
replacements by design.
Will you still love my smile,
and kiss me, and not revile?"
(He)"Teeth, lovely one, are for chewing.
What does that have to do with kissing?
I can close my eyes and feel your smile.
Soft warm lips, truthful, no beguile!"
(She)"And as the fleeting years fly by.
There will come a day, to say "Goodbye."
Will you still love me then, and hold
me close to your heart, my friend?"
(He)"I promise, my love, I'll hold you near
to my heart, 'til your last breath.
I pledge to you, I'll still love you,
even, after death!"
Created especially
for Phantoms' 4th Anniversary
November 30th, 2003
Cheri Cami LeBren
with warm love & many
more to come!
Lovingcritters
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-11-11 10:22:10]
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Re: WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:29:39 AM AEST
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| That was absolutely beautiful hun. Congrats to you as well Phantom. |
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Re: WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 03:22:57 PM AEST
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This is one helluva beautiful and touching poem, Connie..and it could not have been written for a finer couple... Great write...
Hugs to the lovely couple..
Jenni |
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Re: WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
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by norm on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 07:09:21 PM AEST
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Written like a true romanric
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I hope what you see of heaven
is forcast for this family seven,
And as you say, one lives and loves
and emulates the turtle doves...
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Re: WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:48:52 PM AEST
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| They both deserved this tribute! Happy more to you guys!Christina |
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Re: WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 12:40:46 AM AEST
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| very nice tribute.. venkat |
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Re: WILL YOU STILL LOVE ME?
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 12:10:43 PM AEST
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very sweet connie, im sure they both loved this thoughtful poem! hugs n' love nessa
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