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Ebbing Plight
Contributed by
cobalt
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 10:12:31 AM in AEST
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A burning question of why,
why bother fighting at all.
Had hit absolute bottom
lost al in a whirlwind.
There is no longer a point
absolutely no reason at all.
Blazing so deeply inside
letting my fists fly.
A dark void within
and unable to shed a tear.
Yet somehow and still
I continue to rage.
Can feel myself dying.
With each passing moment
I can feel my spirit
burning brighter and brighter.
I need to know why
I'm unable to cry.
Above even that
why is it I fight
when I'm too tired to try.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
cobalt
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2003-11-11 10:12:31]
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Re: Ebbing Plight
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 04:17:50 PM AEST
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I read your poem several times
and I think I know why.....you have a courageous heart!....You desire to give up, but you passionate heart wont allow....it wants you to live one even now!
Great thought provoking poem, Cobalt.
I enjoyed it.
Lovingcritters
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Re: Ebbing Plight
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 05:43:30 PM AEST
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| know how you feel..s. |
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Re: Ebbing Plight
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 18th November 2003 @ 12:07:39 PM AEST
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Touching write..well written...great courage shown..
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Re: Ebbing Plight
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 10th January 2004 @ 12:03:19 PM AEST
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WoW!!! This one is fantastic!! Very touching! Amazing description. Keep on fighting....and writing ;)
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