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Leaving You Behind
Contributed by
cammy
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 06:27:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Life has dealt me,
A very bad hand,
I really want to leave,
This heart breaking land.
To stop this hurt,
I would have to die,
No-one could know,
I would have to lie.
One more week,
Till my life ends,
When I take that last pill,
Death it will send.
Nothing can stop me,
It’s my time to leave,
The hurt you will know,
And why I had to deceive.
Copyright ©
cammy
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2003-11-11 06:27:18]
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Re: Leaving You Behind
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by sugar0986 on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 06:41:36 AM AEST
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very good write.....it's like i feel what your feeling
~Brittany~ |
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Re: Leaving You Behind
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th November 2003 @ 11:26:37 AM AEST
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I like this poem but I hope it is not a cry for help.If you take that last pill we won't be deceived,we here will all know! And life is to precious to just give up,as we all have been dealt a raw deal,but perservering and overcoming is what makes us stronger.If you want to PM me...feel free...my door is always open!!!!! 0:-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni {{{cammy}}} |
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Re: Leaving You Behind
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 05:55:27 AM AEST
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yes, im going to repeat what joni did, and that you can PM me any time.. I have felt like this sooo many times.. I can relate..
This is a good poem by the way. I think poetry is an excellent way to scream out pain, isn't it?
charlotte x_x_x |
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