|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
No longer for you
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 02:00:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
No longer for you do I cry
you have sucked me dry
Drained my spirit
Robbed me of hope
decieved my heart
ripped my fragile soul apart
tarnished my mind with lies
burnt my eyes with unreal visions
of you really were
scorched my love with your hate
denied that I cared
treated my feelings unfair
ignored my pain
and always tried to make me feel
guilty and take the blame
JENNA
Copyright ©
PhantomVampyress
... [
2003-11-11 02:00:02]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: No longer for you
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 02:57:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Good strong writing and I 2 know this feelings but thank God I'm free at last!
Good work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
|
|
Re: No longer for you
(User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 07:21:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i like this i know its a sad experiance but i didnt make it harder to read because it was just so god damn good. but i do hope things look up 4u
Lou |
|
|
Re: No longer for you
(User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 07:22:23 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i like this i know its a sad experiance but i didnt make it harder to read because it was just so god damn good. but i do hope things look up 4u
Lou |
|
|
Re: No longer for you
(User Rating: 1 )
by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:13:41 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Jenna,
This is definitly one of my favorites! U know, I can relate! GREAT POEM!!
Diana |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
