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SO LONELY (Sensual)
Contributed by
Del
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Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 10:53:36 PM in AEST
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Darling, I'm so lonely,
These nights when we're apart.
I wish that I could give you,
A key to open up my heart.
I hug my pillow every night,
And make believe it's you.
Sometimes it's so hard to believe,
I feel the way I do.
I put my fingers to my lips,
And kiss them tenderly,
Pretending they are your lips,
And you are kissing me.
Passion comes so naturally,
While I'm holding you oh, so near.
I pretend that you are saying,
'I love you so, my dear.'
So once again what I have to do,
To release this exotic pressure,
Is rely on my very personal friend,
A friend, whom I also treasure.
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Del
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2003-11-10 22:53:36]
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Re: SO LONELY (Sensual)
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:10:07 PM AEST
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Beautifull writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: SO LONELY (Sensual)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:14:13 PM AEST
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I got lost in this one..I have spent many nights like this.
Excellent..and I have to say this cracked me up..in a neat way
"So once again what I have to do,
To release this exotic pressure,
Is rely on my very personal friend,
A friend, whom I also treasure."
I hear ya *winks* LOL |
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Re: SO LONELY (Sensual)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:17:30 PM AEST
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errrr oops!! I'm the anonymous one :) Forgot I wasnt logged in *shrugs*
Im still havin a giggle at the last verse..Im pretty sure its meaning what I THINK it means lol |
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Re: SO LONELY (Sensual)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:17:53 PM AEST
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errrr oops!! I'm the anonymous one :) Forgot I wasnt logged in *shrugs*
Im still havin a giggle at the last verse..Im pretty sure its meaning what I THINK it means lol
loving whispers |
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Re: SO LONELY (Sensual)
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:58:43 PM AEST
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I guess friends are everyready to help; hade a good laugh, thanks.
Twinkletoes! |
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