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Open up
Contributed by
spiffyphil
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Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 10:39:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Eaten alive if she found out,
best to keep my heart contained.
Heaven knows what should bring about,
intense feelings collectively remained.
Project my inners and put my gaurd down,
Set my heart free - having been hurt before.
Heaven collapses when she makes a frown,
I have warmth for this girl I ever so much adore.
Time is slow when the time is not right,
As another needs one to hold with love.
If she were mine - I would hold her tight,
But for now she is free as a dove.
My mind grinds and squeeks,
Because thoughts of her wont fade.
I wonder how she peacefully sleeps,
When insomnia becomes my trade.
Things will be different someday I know,
She will hear my heart speak to her.
I hope I can handle her saying no,
Saying yes would be my cure
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Re: Open up
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 11:12:50 PM AEST
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Very sweet and good luck!
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: Open up
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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Great write! This a difucult emotion to explain, you did it very good!
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