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love lost
Contributed by
alime
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Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 01:42:33 PM in AEST
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A year ago,
Today we met,
A day that which I won't forget
What's come to pass,
Will never heal,
Was this ever real?
Loves bitter edge of fear and fury,
Sent us both away in such a hurry
I built you up, then let you down
With passion and pleasure,
That could not measure,
The pain that put us both
In the ground
Soon love will be taken,
And that too which,
Can't be foresaken
The time will pass,
Until we both can start anew,
Without the love that never grew
Copyright ©
alime
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2003-11-10 13:42:33]
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Re: love lost
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by Cora-Windover on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 04:31:18 PM AEST
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That's so sweet, and sad. I especially like the last line. *sniff*
Goddess Bless ~Cora Windover |
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Re: love lost
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by michelled43 on
Thursday, 20th November 2003 @ 12:36:59 AM AEST
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| so cute......loved the last two lines.....great write! |
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