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Live or die?
Contributed by
cammy
on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 02:09:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The pills spill out,
The thought crosses my mind,
Maybe I should die,
As I’m walking blind.
Time is running out,
The hurts getting worse,
Death seems nearer,
It’s like a curse.
Dark clouds form,
Thunder sound,
Rain starts forming,
As it hits the ground.
I feel so weak,
And completely helpless,
Why can’t the pain stop,
And end this duress.
Life draws to an end,
As I finish the last pill,
I go unconscious,
And lay very still.
Copyright ©
cammy
... [
2003-11-10 02:09:02]
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Re: Live or die?
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 02:13:26 AM AEST
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Woo now,
We can't have u killing yourself as we need u 2 keep writing!
Promise me u want do that, k?
U can hang in there as u r a strong person that we need on this planet!
Do u hear me?
peace, joy, luv,
emy
It seems there are many that wonna die and it breaks my heart 2 see it! |
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Re: Live or die?
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by EmSal on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:20:13 AM AEST
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Never a nice thought, just hope you don't carry through with it at all, I know I have been there many times but I am still here...so take care okay. All the best. Oh yeah and a good write too :).
Emma. |
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