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YOu deserve
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 12:14:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You took all I had away
turned my heart to black
YOu deserve to burn
you deserve to bleed
I ache inside each day I look you in the eye
just being near you makes me want to cry
you deserve to burn
you deserve to bleed
I don't know how long
we will last
Will I ever be able to put this in the past?
You deserve to burn
you deserve to bleed
for what you did to me
JENNA
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2003-11-10 00:14:08]
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Re: YOu deserve
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 12:15:37 AM AEST
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Jenna,
This has a power to it and I think that I can fully understand. I hope you can forgive... Or if nothing else move on. |
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Re: YOu deserve
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by irshprnss on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 08:06:38 AM AEST
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Another great on jenna! Thanks
Diana |
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