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Drowned Friendship
Contributed by
irshprnss
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Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:58:16 PM in AEST
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I don’t understand, refuse to pretend,
I don’t know and never will
why emotions I lend
and decision my own, true friendships kill
why tears already fallen drowned those that were close,
not by me but those who don’t care
and even though I dry them they hurt more than most
catching those who ran and are no longer here.
A brother in my eyes until I let him down,
he never did look back
in my own tears he left me to drowned
when I turned to reach he was already In the past
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irshprnss
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2003-11-09 19:58:16]
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Re: Drowned Friendship
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 08:01:56 PM AEST
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| I liked this my friend..left to drown in your own tears..tragic . very well done! Larry |
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Re: Drowned Friendship
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 10:53:16 PM AEST
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Very good write indeed,
but don't pick up where they left off.
You know how to relate don't blame it on you.
Very sicko people you will view!
Beautiful poem, you have so much talent!
Be Brave, Be Strong, Be gallant!
Wonderful poem, I liked it alot!
lovingcritters
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Re: Drowned Friendship
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 04:38:31 AM AEST
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| Welldone...venkat |
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Re: Drowned Friendship
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by doug on
Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 10:50:42 PM AEST
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| when i turned to reach he was already in the past , what a great line. i loved this poem, your friend doug |
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