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caught in headlights (or kick the creep)
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 03:56:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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whats the use in crying
when no one cares
stop trying to hide you eyes
you cant avoid their calous stares
frustration is pointless
when no one can hear your mangled adolesant screams
anxiety and paranioa
long walks alone in the moonlight
midnights alone in the cellar
writing songs of suicide and rebellion
malnutrition and low budjet films
never knowing when to say cut
forsaken by the father
loathing the mother
living as the creep
never fitting in
on either side of the track
so stand in between
and wait for the headkights
die listening to the wistle
Copyright ©
TaintedOptomist
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2003-11-09 15:56:54]
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Re: caught in headlights (or kick the creep)
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:46:22 PM AEST
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wierd, but good nonetheless.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: caught in headlights (or kick the creep)
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by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 04:08:47 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem quite alot. But then I do tend to like all upsetting poetry. I like the last two lines the most! Very very deep. hope to find more great poetry from you!
~Amy~ |
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Re: caught in headlights (or kick the creep)
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 08:35:42 PM AEST
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| i love this one too. ncie capturing of stuff :) |
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