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You're Everywhere
Contributed by
TracyAnn489
on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 05:45:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When I close my eyes
I see your face
When others speak
I hear your voice
When I sleep at night
I dream of you
you're everywhere
you're always on my mind
and it's driving me insane
I can't stand to be this far apart
phone calls as friends aren't enough anymore
I long to see you face to face
and hold you close in my arms
I long to look into your eyes
and feel your sweet gentle kiss again
I miss the way you used to smile
everytime our eyes would meet
and how everytime I'd tickle you
you'd beg for me to stop
I miss running my fingers through your soft hair
and across your soft skin
I miss how you would wipe the tears off my face
and tell me everything would be okay
I even miss our pointless fights
I want to tell you that I'm sorry
for breaking your heart and hurting you
but no words can express
how truely sorry I am
they can't even come close
I want you to forgive me
I want you back and by my side
I want us to be happy again
but most of all and more than anything
I need you in my life
Copyright ©
TracyAnn489
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2003-11-09 05:45:19]
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Re: You're Everywhere
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by texasw97 on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:13:16 AM AEST
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| cool. nothing like writing to get over a lost love |
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Re: You're Everywhere
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:38:42 AM AEST
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you can definately feel the emotions in this poem.. so sad but very well written.. I hope you get him back... and everything works out for you ...
peace and joy
JENNA |
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Re: You're Everywhere
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by SpreadYourWings on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 03:38:10 PM AEST
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| I can nearly feel all your pain. My condolences to what you're going through. |
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Re: You're Everywhere
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 04:37:48 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, TracyAnn.. I hope hr reads this poem and sees how much you need him and come back to you.. It was such a sincere write...
Loved your other poems..Hope to see more from you soon..
Jenni |
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Re: You're Everywhere
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 09:31:44 PM AEST
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| it hurts to lose what you love and hold so dear, just never stop fighting if you truly want him back |
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Re: You're Everywhere
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 09:33:08 PM AEST
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Well for starters show him you can be a friend to him. Show him that you can be there when he needs help. If you can get him to fall back in love with you so be it but you can't force him if he fell out of love. Just try to stay in contact. He may miss you and if you are staying away from him the longer the harder anything will be. Don't go off and cry in front of him begging for him back but I can't explain it things have a way or working out though. Oh sorry great write and welcome to this wonderful site.
Jeff |
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