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Charles VanLaan RIP

Contributed by TracyAnn489 on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 05:41:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Charles VanLaan R.I.P.


For the last 23 years
you were many wonderful things
a caring husband, a loving father,
a man with many goals and dreams
but even before you met your wife
you were a man of so much more
you were a soldier, a fighter
who survived the Vietnam War
You were faced with another battle
that lasted almost a year
it was painful and rough and times got hard
oh how I wish that you were still here
But on April 24th of 2003
the Lord took you away
Sometimes I miss you so much I burst into tears
and wish it hadn't ended this way
You fought the cancer for over 9 months
I still can't believe that you died
My mind is so whacked, I can't even remember
the number of nights that I've cried
When you needed me the most
I know I wasn't there
and my reasoning for this
I would like to share
When the doctors told us how long you had
I think my heart skipped a beat
I wanted to dive right out of that window
and land head first on the street
I regret not facing you and hate myself
more and more each day
I should have sat down and talked to you
there were so many things I needed to say
I should have tried to comfort you
I should have said good-bye
But all I did was stand at the window
All I could do was cry
I want to say I'm sorry
for what I'd put you through
and everything I did that night
or really, everything I didn't do
I'll try to remember the good things
and block out all of the bad
I hope you know how much I miss you
and how much I love you, Dad.




Copyright © TracyAnn489 ... [ 2003-11-09 05:41:26]
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Re: Charles VanLaan RIP (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 08:40:51 AM AEST
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hi nice write touching.


Re: Charles VanLaan RIP (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 04:31:17 PM AEST
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Awwww...this is so beautifully written.. So many emotions displayed here..I'm sure he knows how much you loved him and cared.... Great write..one to be very proud of..
Jenni




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