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Comprehendable
Contributed by
BrghtNSnshny
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 07:41:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The world reels our of proportions,
People have many distotions.
No one understand the need,
No one hears you plead.
Alone,
Forsaken.
In a corner, in a ball,
Down a long empty hall.
Yelling out your cry of dispair,
People don't hear your prayer.
To pierce things with an icey glare,
Why isn't anything fare.
Will anyone ever see,
Life is littered with debris.
One day,
The world will be gray,
And all will go away.
Copyright ©
BrghtNSnshny
... [
2003-11-08 19:41:12]
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Re: Comprehendable
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by JonDgreat on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 08:37:03 PM AEST
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Good job girl. You got alot of tallent in writing, you should keep expressing everything you got. And yeah like i say when ppl read my poems "yeah they sound good i guess, but it sure felt like living those words. sometimes i wish i could never have through that hard time", but throught hard times, it shows the person we really are, mostly through poetry.
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Re: Comprehendable
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by sugar0986 on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:43:03 PM AEST
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Hey, this was a really good poem you are good at writing keep it up and keep at it.
~Brittany~ |
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