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your smile
Contributed by
texasw97
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Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 06:30:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Your smile to me is a wonderful sight
It's like the stars shining at midnight
It's big and red like a blow pop
But with every cause it teases me a lot
Your smile blends in well with your face
It's locked secure in a tiny safe
Your smile isn't like any other smile
It's like the sun hiding between the clouds
You know what I mean, it makes me proud
Your smile reminds me of a toy I once had
It was something I loved and never made me sad
To me your smile shines so bright
Not even a sandstorm could forefeel its might
Your smile to me is like buried treasure
You search and search to find something special
And when you open it, it’s a beautiful pleasure
Your smile could never be replace
No matter how much money someone offers to me
I would never let your smile be removed from your face
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texasw97
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2003-11-08 18:30:08]
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Re: your smile
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 03:59:29 AM AEST
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What a beautiful thing to say...the last two lines especially...good work on a lovely poem. Take care.
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Re: your smile
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by 13Hopes on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 12:09:44 PM AEST
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How is it that an action so simple as a smile give so many wonderful feelings..
Nice read!!!
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