|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Because Of You!!!...
Contributed by
hot-shot
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:30:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
Since you came into my life,
My enjoyable life changed into a miserable one.
You came like a spark,
And ruined me like a volcano.
Because of you,
My whole time has altered.
Because of you,
My days are in gloominess.
Because of you,
My nights are sleepless.
Because of you,
My mind is blowing.
Because of you,
My heart became loveless.
Because of you,
My soul became lifeless.
Because of you,
I lost my friends.
Because of you,
I am down in the dumps.
Because of you,
Every possible thing seems to be impossible.
Because of you,
My life became sore, painful, depressed & horrible.
Copyright ©
hot-shot
... [
2003-11-08 14:30:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Because Of You!!!...
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:13:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I really enjoyed reading this.. its very powerful and full of emotions... Great write....
however there is always hope that you must believe in... there will be someone who loves you unconditionally and extremely... you just have to find it... it will come you just have to have faith and hope
peace joy and happiness
JENNA |
|
|
Re: Because Of You!!!...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:06:59 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I hate to but I must inspite of thinking this a great write. If you can't love like that then what is the point of loving. You don't have a choice when you love unless you can't love like that... |
|
|
Re: Because Of You!!!...
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:57:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem was beautiful. It touches each and everyone of us we all had someone like that, but dont let them get you down or think that noone will ever love you again because they will love you. you will find love again with someone so much better then that. trust in God to lead you the way and love with your heart always keep on writing you are good.
|
|
|
Re: Because Of You!!!...
(User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 04:12:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
It is a terrible thing when this happens. Writen excellently through such heart ache. Hope everything gets better for you. Take care.
Emma. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
