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Laying in the bed you made
Contributed by
emotions101
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm stuck in the bed you made
with a lack of love in these covers
my mistake, thinking it would fade
The pain from all the secret lovers
All those in my bed you've laid
Expecting me not to discover
Well I did, I hurt, I die, I live
Without the love I don't have to give
Lost in the tangle of everyones covers
Without love for my only lover
So in this bed I'm left to lay
Paying for all the mistakes you made
Not knowing where to go, or stay
Hoping in time that pain does fade
Until then only left to lay
In whatever sunlights in the shade
Well theirs none, But I still live
Without the love I don't have to give
Lost in the tangle of everyones covers
Without love for my only lover
So in this bed with me you lay
knowing it wasn’t worth my pain
I don’t know why I choose to stay
When our loves you forever stained
You should sleep in the bed you made
Instead of me staying in Vain
But here I am, Here I live
Without the love I don't have to give
Lost in the tangle of everyones covers
Without love for my only lover
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emotions101
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2003-11-08 13:16:12]
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:33:20 PM AEST
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| never a nice thing to happen but in the long run it makes you stronger..... |
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by Ash on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 02:12:31 PM AEST
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| you're cheating husband deserves to rot in the deepest pit of hell. You are so strong for staying, I don't know what I'd do in your position. Thank you for sharing this poem. sometimes it's hard to let others know about these kind of feelings. Your husband doesn't deserve your love. |
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 04:07:48 PM AEST
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this poem is very good and you are very talented.... so sad though... also very touching you can feel the pain in this one
peace joy and happiness
Jenna |
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by shelby on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:41:50 PM AEST
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Im sorry this happened to you you didn't deserve this I know what this feels like as it has happened to me.
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 12:06:20 AM AEST
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I say leave him. Why do you want to stay with someone who has hurt you over and over again you are worth so much more then that. you deserve to be loved and treated great get rid of him he dont deserve you at all .
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:21:40 PM AEST
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I can empathize with you although I can't imagine the pain u must feel. I say leave him your a thousand times better than he ever was. Good poem...
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Re: Laying in the bed you made
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 03:34:19 PM AEST
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| This is an excellent write ... although a painful topic ... love the way you alternated the verses ... and great metaphors ... looking forward to reading more of your work ... Jan |
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