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please breathe

Contributed by tbsbikescene on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:54:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Lets pretend...no fukk it, it would never work
Because your eyes can't go any further from the truth Your an infatution...thats all But I have hungry mouths to feed so please let me be I'm dying inside, my organs are sick
and my heart is dripping tears Oh My God I Can't Breathe....I would catch my breath if I could but I'm coughing up blood...so I guess I'll fall; If I can't see then your the enemy, If I can't see then your the enemy And you better leave before...before we all are not breathing



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Re: please breathe (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 12:25:23 PM AEST
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Good visualization, should brake lines up a little more.........


Lets pretend
no Fcuk it, it would never work
Because your eyes can't go any further
the truth Your an infactution
thats all
But I have hungry mouths to feed
so please let me be
I'm dying inside,
my organs are sick
and my heart is dripping tears
Oh My God I Can't Breathe
I would catch my breath if I could
but I'm coughing up blood
so I guess I'll fall
If I can't see then your the enemy
If I can't see then your the enemy
And you better leave before
before we all are not breathing




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