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S f U r I i C e I n D d E (Suicide Friend)
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:39:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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never met a wise man
if i dids it was a woman
going on a vacation
to see an old friend
a victim of volumes of books
cover my arms try to hid the scars
the charade is over
malnutrition and a bottle full of dreams
pills full of freedom
paranoia adds to the mystique
moonlight walks with the poison of prohibiton
take time to visit an old friend
catch up with old times
to live with suicide
Copyright ©
TaintedOptomist
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2003-11-08 11:39:54]
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Re: S f U r I i C e I n D d E (Suicide Friend)
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:56:24 PM AEST
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| wow i like this. interesting choice of language. xXx |
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Re: S f U r I i C e I n D d E (Suicide Friend)
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 04:22:07 AM AEST
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Very interesting...even the way you wrote the title...good write.
Emma. |
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Re: S f U r I i C e I n D d E (Suicide Friend)
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 07:12:41 PM AEST
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good poem although odd. I liked the imagery.
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Re: S f U r I i C e I n D d E (Suicide Friend)
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by TaintedOptomist on
Thursday, 13th November 2003 @ 12:56:52 PM AEST
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| ok the bit messed up the volumes of books was a play on words..it's supposed to be valuums. |
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