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Your Loveless Life
Contributed by
katzie
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 10:00:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Smiles appear as I glance across the room
Stomachs churn as our eyes meet
You shift as you feel that I assume
That you are mine- you've no retreat
Now in my mind there's no such thing
Quite quick to conclusions are you
You haven't a clue what I intend to bring
And whether you like it or not- It's true
You have a past, one of bitter mistrust
You don't want a relationship now
You think it would have to be love or lust
For without the two you wouldn't know how
I stand up from my seat and walk over to you
Sitting back down as close as I can
You shrink backwards uneasily, you don't want it this way
And I laugh, for you think that you know my plan
I lean closer to you, eyes narrowing deceptivly
You try to push me away from your side
I will not be moved, I continue expectantly
You feel that I'm tearing down all of your pride
But it's more than that honey
I've played my part well
I've tricked you quite easily
All is under my spell
For as I grew closer and your anger did rise
You noticed not what I held in my hand
The knife that I held and was soon in your side
Just as my nightmares had planned
Would you not have rathered the affair?
Would you rather have lived, and loved me?
We could have been such a lovely pair
And your soul would still roam free
It matters not, for what's done is done
Your loveless life slips away before my eyes
I feel no remorse at that you're gone
Glad you did not live long enough to hear my say goodbye
Perhaps it is even better for you this way
Without love your life was truly worthless
I have done you a merciful favor this day
Yes your life without love was greatly pointless
Copyright ©
katzie
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2003-11-08 10:00:41]
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Re: Your Loveless Life
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 10:48:05 PM AEST
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| This somehow strikes me as sick and I like it. I do have to question though the kind of person that would do that though... Seriously though I liked this one. |
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Re: Your Loveless Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 11th November 2003 @ 09:26:30 PM AEST
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Ouch!! Well written...but....ouch..
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