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My Bleeding Heart
Contributed by
night_child
on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 08:23:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You took your cold knife of lies
And stabbed it deep into my heart
Twisting and turning it with every word you said
Now my heart bleeds
For you
My soul broken
My life a waste
You told me I could tell you anything
Anytime I held back you told me not to
I thought you were the only one who could help me
I really did
But in reality
You were the one who hurt me most
I don't want your pity
I never did
I only told you about my depression because I thought I could trust you
I thought you were the only one I could trust
Everyone said you were no good for me
Even your own friends
But my heart sheilded my eyes
Why didn't I listen?
I still love you
And I always will
But my heart will bleed until the day I die
So may I die before I wake
No more pain
No more tears
Copyright ©
night_child
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2003-11-08 08:23:40]
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by katzie on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 10:08:04 AM AEST
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| Wow.... just... wow. I can feel anger and pain in this writing... such a good write. |
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 09:17:21 PM AEST
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That is really good...it shows great emotion...its to bad it hurts so bad..almost like you can't see straight, even more when it is the person you love and will forever continue to love..i know...a broken continues to beat
great poem
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 10:43:46 PM AEST
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| I agree only I would have said sorrow and hate. It's really good though. |
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Re: My Bleeding Heart
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by EmSal on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:59:13 AM AEST
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That last paragraph yes!!!! and even the second last paragraph yess!!!! Great poem...sad...thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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