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DARK POETRY
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 06:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Bleak, Dull, Dank, Dark Day
Every color green, now brown!
Dirty snow, on ground.
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
November 2003
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-11-08 06:33:11]
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 11:08:04 AM AEST
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Well done, I'm really not a fan of Haiku poetry, but have read many. One thing though, Haiku does not have to rhyme, but well done all the same.
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 07:15:13 PM AEST
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| good good good girl!!!!!!!! |
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 11:04:43 PM AEST
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Eleven votes, where is everybody. This is a beautiful haiku here. Just read Spazzos, you two are great haiku poets. wow. I wrote one to post.. just call me scaredy cat lol. I write them for myself. Maybe one day I will get up the nerve to share them. Love this ... is grrr8
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th March 2008 @ 10:46:31 AM AEST
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This is pretty good. Could you take a look at my Haiku "Sun" and tell me what you think?
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by emmyb14 on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:02:30 PM AEST
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not my cup o tea,
sorry |
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by 5MinutePoet on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 05:42:13 PM AEST
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| Always good to try new things, but I wouldn't say this is dark. If anything I would say the inevitability of changing seasons is one of the greatest comforts we have. To know that every year has its twilight is glorious and the hues and tones that it produces have provided muse for some of the greatest romantics who have ever dared to express. |
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Re: DARK POETRY
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 11th November 2009 @ 08:35:30 PM AEST
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very vivid, loved it!
take care
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