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Differences
Contributed by
Demon
on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:30:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You touch,I watch
I turn,You take
Im dull,Your bright
Your real,Im fake
I move,You follow
You jump,I run
I hate,You love
Your smart,Im dumb
You gain,I lose
You finish,I start
Im trapped,Your free
Your whole,Im part
You think,I don't
Im shallow,your deep
I bury,You dig
I starve,You feed
Your honest,I lie
Im cruel,Your kind
I hide,You show
You see,Im blind
I push,You pull
Im selfish,You care
You feel,I cant
I glance,You stare
I cry,You smile
You laugh,I frown
I sink,You swim
You live,I drown
Copyright ©
Demon
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2002-08-24 07:30:53]
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Re: Differences
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by Suzy on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:38:49 AM AEST
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I like this..sometimes there's just too many differences.....
Lasca |
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Re: Differences
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by LJ on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:53:13 AM AEST
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This is good. I like the way it flows.
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Re: Differences
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:53:26 AM AEST
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| that is suck a great poem... hard to put into words what I'm feeling right now. Excellent! |
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Re: Differences
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by MisterRight on
Saturday, 24th August 2002 @ 07:54:06 AM AEST
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| that should say such a great poem down there... opps |
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Re: Differences
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by Poetess730 on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 03:44:58 AM AEST
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| wow that was really deep.. I like the contrast excellent write...5 * |
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