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Losing it
Contributed by
ski901
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 08:00:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's all been adding up,
all my pain and fear.
Soon I'll lose it,
the day is drawing near.
Just waiting for the moment,
when I can't take it anymore.
How much longer will I last?
What am I waiting for?
One side says calm down,
while the other one says go,
which one will prevail,
I guess I'll never know.
Copyright ©
ski901
... [
2003-11-07 20:00:03]
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Re: Losing it
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 12:19:26 AM AEST
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great poem and very good for a short one i really liked it please post some more you have alot of talen
great write
peace and joy
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Re: Losing it
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 01:34:40 AM AEST
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Relate to this I can hang in there and keep on writing.
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