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When Ur gone
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 05:46:20 PM in AEST
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One day after you are gone
a stone will stand up for you...
a statue which people will look at
and admire ... more than they did to you...
If one word can mean happiness
they ll write letters to your soul
Light some candles
say prayers all they can do...
Much or less regret doesnt matter
after all they did to you...
Maybe someone out there really loved you...
Copyright ©
cant-skate
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2003-11-07 17:46:20]
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Re: When Ur gone
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:27:51 PM AEST
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| this is strange, i like poems that make me wonder.... who is this person? i ponder... this is different, good write! x |
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Re: When Ur gone
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by jaeann on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM AEST
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| i like.......you leave me thinking....... |
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Re: When Ur gone
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:32:19 AM AEST
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That's truly beautiful... so touching. Like someone else said, it left me thinking. So great job! Very effective write.
~ Moonlit |
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