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Holding blanks
Contributed by
cobalt
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Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 12:26:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's always struck me as funny
Watching another try,
try so hard that they die inside.
Cunning and hurtful they were
odd to see them breakdown and cry.
Ignoring their very own heart
led to more pain than caused.
I've let them all cry,
sobbing against me in angst.
Ironic though now,
that I can't cry for me.
Been told many times,
just to be selfish.
They all try to say
that it's finally my turn.
How can that be,
when I don't breath.
I can't seem to find it
while they gently coo.
Grown so cold over years.
Yearning for anything
while always putting
others first
has earned me nothing.
Nothing of what I need anyway.
The book of the faulty phoenix
Copyright ©
cobalt
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2003-11-07 12:26:54]
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Re: Holding blanks
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by loopylou on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:00:15 PM AEST
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| No your wrong putting others first creates good karlmer and respect your see you wont feel like this forever...... |
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Re: Holding blanks
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 8th November 2003 @ 01:23:18 AM AEST
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Refer to my post in the forum on the topic. :)
Great write btw. In all honesty I'm not quite sure how that last line fits in but nonetheless.
~ Moonlit |
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