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Let Me Help!!!
Contributed by
Katie-Kate
on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 03:47:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm going insane
My head's a mess
I'm trying to cope
With this stupid F****** stress
Memories that haunt
Me through the day
They wont let up
My conscience will pay.
Let me see if I can help
I'll put my S*** on hold
Tell me all your problems
While my heart turns cold
I want to scream
To let it out
LEt loose with my fists
Anxieties to shout
I need support
To get me through
It shouldn't have happened
This I knew.
Let me see if I can help
I'll put my S*** on hold
Tell me all your problems
While my heart turns cold.
History never vanishes
My Bad! I should know
It's always waiting around
It never fails to show
People bring it up each day
Rub it in your face
They'll never let you forget
There'll always be a trace
So let me see if I can help[
I'll put my S*** on hold
Tell me all your problems
While my ehart turns cold.
I've been burnt by every lover
Tossed aside, and then
Blamed by my conscience
And returned to pain again
Abused by my friends
Left out in the night
Things always go wrong
No matter how i fight.
So let me see if I can help
I'll put my S*** on hold
Tell me all your problems
While my ehart turns cold
I'll make your F****** dreams come true
I'll wake you from the dead
While I'm slowly sinking
Consumed by hate and dread
But success will be yours
I'll be left behind
I'll solve all your S***
While losing my mind.
Copyright ©
Katie-Kate
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2003-11-07 03:47:34]
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Re: Let Me Help!!!
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 05:35:56 AM AEST
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A very thought provoking write!
It's very strong in meaning!
Great work and I know the feelings!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Let Me Help!!!
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by loopylou on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 01:17:03 PM AEST
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| a good strong poem simple but with a raw meaning |
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Re: Let Me Help!!!
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 04:20:21 AM AEST
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Third read this morning, I'm getting to know you a bit better. I only have a brief comment on this one...
............the story of my life........
bob
PS I'll read some more this evening. |
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